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in a clear, careful, sharply focused essay, explain what determinism claims, then explain the additional claims made by hard determinism. Many philosophers have thought that hard determinism is very disturbing; explain why. Soft
determinists think that free will is possible even in a completely deterministic
universe. Give a clear,
careful, sharply focused explanation of what you take to be the best version of soft
determinism. Do you think that version of soft determinism is convincing?
Explain why, or why not. Explain scientific libertarianism. Do you think that scientific libertarianism is less disturbing than determinism? Explain why, or why not.
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